Ok so far i've not finalized my character nor what background i would wanna have. like the camera angle and shot sizes. What i've been doing was making my story better and working on my learning contract. Not quite sure if i do it right but i will aksed Alan tommorrow as it was my group's turn.
Quite hectic though need to do Animation2 and P3, it's like both have to do character, sotryboard and animation. Gosh~ i need to endure this!!
Anyway, this is so far what ive done for my story.
I wanted to put the tittle as Messes with the wrong guy. But Naf gave me a better idea....
Man Strikes Back!
One sunny Saturday afternoon, as usual, Abeeku went out for hunting in the jungle. As he was busy looking out for livestock, he accidentally step on something soft. All of a sudden, his leg was entangled with the body of a huge python. Abeeku panic as the python drag him up the tree. He wiggles, trying to break himself free but nothing seems to be working. Python looks him in the eye trying to hypnotise Abeeku but he turned away. Abeeku had no choice but to fight himself out.
Out of the blue, Abeeku was thinking of boxing. Without wasting anytime, Abeeku fist his hands and boxed the python twice in the face. His first punched got him straight in its face but not the second one as the python dodge it. Python got frustrated. Using his tail, python tickle Abeeku’s chin and slap him twice using his tail.
Abeeku went dizzy and shook his head so he could stay focus. Python stared him hard and start squeezing Abeeku’s body. Abeeku was suffocated and feeling all weak and Abeeku starting to close his eyes. The python thought that Abeeku’s dead, so the python open its mouth so wide and aiming straight for Abeeku’s head. Abeeku smiles and before python could reach him, Abeeku’s bite the python’s head.
The python cries out in pain and set Abeeku free.
Im trying my best not to put any lipsync cause Alan didnt mention that it has to have lipsync. So what i didnt was try to insert as many SFX as possible for it to blend in.
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Should call the title as "Man Eating Snake" so that people think you mean man-eating snake but then as he's about to be eaten, he does the biting instead... :-)
ReplyDeleteThink about how to affect your audience's emotions. I would probably tell the story in a kind of Jaws style - omniscient so the audience sees what's coming but the victim doesn't.
ReplyDeleteDon't follow too closely to the jungle book - it's good reference, but if all your reference comes from one source, then it starts to seem like plagiarism! Try balancing it out by watching Anaconda or whichever Harry Potter movie has the giant snake... (?)
I would think this would have a great surprise if all the way through it looks like horror until the final moment when your victim bites the snake, at which point it becomes a bit slapstick humour. Humour is much more likely to generate a laugh if it is accompanied by a release of tension.